cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml

Remko Lodder remko at elvandar.org
Thu Sep 18 08:14:32 UTC 2008


On Thu, September 18, 2008 10:06 am, Pav Lucistnik wrote:
> Remko Lodder pí¹e v èt 18. 09. 2008 v 09:38 +0200:
>
>> > pav         2008-09-18 07:33:23 UTC
>> >
>> >   FreeBSD doc repository
>> >
>> >   Modified files:
>> >     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
>> >                                                        chapter.sgml
>> >   Log:
>> >   In Bluetooth section, reflect there is now a regular rc script
>> >
>> >   Revision  Changes    Path
>> >   1.414     +3 -5
>> > doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
>> >
>>
>> You and I had almost the same change:
>>
>> <<<<<<< chapter.sgml
>>       <para>The <filename>/etc/rc.d/bluetooth</filename> is used to
>>         start and stop the Bluetooth stack.  It is a good
>> =======
>>       <para>The <filename>/etc/rc.d/bluetooth</filename> script
>>         is used to start and stop the Bluetooth stack. It is a good
>> >>>>>>> 1.414
>>
>>
>> I would suggest adding "script" or "file" after the <filename> because
>> that defines the "The /etc/rc.d/bluetooth" as either a file or script :)
>
> I would suggest that too. In fact, I actually used the word 'script'
> there. So... what's up, doc? :)

Oh dreaded, perhaps I forgot it in my local change :-/ oh well. good work
Pav... I will go shame in a corner :)

Cheers
remko

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