cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml

[Ganbold]

Tom Rhodes wrote:
> trhodes     2008-07-13 18:23:57 UTC
>
>   FreeBSD doc repository
>
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Rewrite the IPsec section to bring it up to date and make it easier to
>   get a VPN up and running.  While here, remove discussion on FAST_IPSEC
>   since it's no longer a valid kernel option.
>   
>   PR:                     121863
>   Quick review by:        remko
>   
>   Revision  Changes    Path
>   1.324     +293 -829  doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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Tom,

I think you meant:

      <para>At this point, both networks should be available and
    seem to be part of the same network.  Most likely both
    networks are protected by a firewall, as they should be.  To
-    allow traffic to flow between them, rules need to be added
+    allow traffic flow between them, rules need to be added

Maybe I'm wrong here.

thanks,

Ganbold

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