cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml

Fri Mar 9 13:54:11 UTC 2007

keramida    2007-03-09 13:54:10 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Tweak a bit the text, to make it easier to read.  "It is worth
  your while ensuring" may be confusing to some non-native English
  readers.  "It is a good idea to ensure" means the same and it
  carries less potential for confusion.
  
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