cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11 chapter.sgml

[Marc Fonvieille]

blackend    2007-07-09 12:00:38 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11 chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  - Reword the sentence about what is X11 to make it closer to "a
    consensus of opinion" and to the reality [1]
  - Various style, grammar and punctuation fixes [1]
  - Update the name of the FreeBSD KDE team to "KDE on FreeBSD team"
    (based on http://freebsd.kde.org/)
  
  PR:             doc/114337 [1]
  Submitted by:   Ben Kaduk <minimarmot at gmail.com>
  
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