cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml

Tom Rhodes trhodes at FreeBSD.org
Fri Oct 13 04:56:05 PDT 2006


On Fri, 13 Oct 2006 12:43:43 +0100
Ceri Davies <ceri at submonkey.net> wrote:

> On Fri, Oct 13, 2006 at 10:29:52AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > trhodes     2006-10-13 10:29:52 UTC
> > 
> >   FreeBSD doc repository
> > 
> >   Modified files:
> >     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml 
> >   Log:
> >   "Many sections do not yet exist" sounds very misleading to me.  Reword
> >   slightly to be more in line with the current state of our handbook.
> 
> 
> > | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml	2006/05/16 14:01:06	1.166
> > | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml	2006/10/13 10:29:51	1.167
> > | @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@
> > |  	to day use of <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel2.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>
> > |  	and <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>.
> > |  	This manual is a <emphasis>work in progress</emphasis> and is the work
> > | -	of many individuals.  Many sections do not yet exist and some of those
> > | -	that do exist need to be updated.  If you are interested in helping
> > | +	of many individuals.  As such, some sections may become dated and need
> > | +	updated.  If you are interested in helping out
> 
> ... and require updating.

Bah, it sounded good at the time.  My Friday the 13th came early
this year.

-- 
Tom Rhodes


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