cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml
Tom Rhodes
trhodes at FreeBSD.org
Fri Oct 13 04:56:05 PDT 2006
On Fri, 13 Oct 2006 12:43:43 +0100
Ceri Davies <ceri at submonkey.net> wrote:
> On Fri, Oct 13, 2006 at 10:29:52AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > trhodes 2006-10-13 10:29:52 UTC
> >
> > FreeBSD doc repository
> >
> > Modified files:
> > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml
> > Log:
> > "Many sections do not yet exist" sounds very misleading to me. Reword
> > slightly to be more in line with the current state of our handbook.
>
>
> > | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/05/16 14:01:06 1.166
> > | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/10/13 10:29:51 1.167
> > | @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@
> > | to day use of <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel2.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>
> > | and <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>.
> > | This manual is a <emphasis>work in progress</emphasis> and is the work
> > | - of many individuals. Many sections do not yet exist and some of those
> > | - that do exist need to be updated. If you are interested in helping
> > | + of many individuals. As such, some sections may become dated and need
> > | + updated. If you are interested in helping out
>
> ... and require updating.
Bah, it sounded good at the time. My Friday the 13th came early
this year.
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Tom Rhodes
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