cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml
ceri at submonkey.net
Fri Oct 13 04:45:25 PDT 2006
On Fri, Oct 13, 2006 at 10:29:52AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> trhodes 2006-10-13 10:29:52 UTC
> FreeBSD doc repository
> Modified files:
> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml
> "Many sections do not yet exist" sounds very misleading to me. Reword
> slightly to be more in line with the current state of our handbook.
> | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/05/16 14:01:06 1.166
> | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/10/13 10:29:51 1.167
> | @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@
> | to day use of <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel2.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>
> | and <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>.
> | This manual is a <emphasis>work in progress</emphasis> and is the work
> | - of many individuals. Many sections do not yet exist and some of those
> | - that do exist need to be updated. If you are interested in helping
> | + of many individuals. As such, some sections may become dated and need
> | + updated. If you are interested in helping out
... and require updating.
That must be wonderful! I don't understand it at all.
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