cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml

Giorgos Keramidas keramida at FreeBSD.org
Tue Dec 5 08:17:09 PST 2006


On 2006-12-05 15:20, Ceri Davies <ceri at submonkey.net> wrote:
>On Tue, Dec 05, 2006 at 01:53:54PM +0300, Dmitry Morozovsky wrote:
>> --- books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml	4 Dec 2006 14:43:50 -0000	1.338
>> +++ books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml	5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000
>> @@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@
>>
>>  	  <listitem>
>>  	    <para>The address block being used for this local area
>> -	      network is a Class C block
>> +	      network is a (historical) Class C block
>>  	      (<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid> -
>>  	      <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>).
>>  	      The default netmask is for a Class C network
>
> Any reason we can't get rid of the mention of "class C" in both cases
> there?  Something like:
>
>   The address block being used for this local area network is
>   192.168.0.0 - 192.168.0.255 with a netmask of 255.255.255.0.

Or even better:

    The address block being used for this local area network is
    <emphasis>192.168.0.0/24</emphasis>.

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