cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common freebsd-users.xml

[Ceri Davies]

ceri        2004-12-18 15:23:18 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common freebsd-users.xml 
  Log:
  Some grammatical fixes from the PR below, and some more of my own.
  
  PR:             docs/74624
  Submitted by:   Gavin Atkinson <gavin dot atkinson at ury dot york dot ac dot uk>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.4       +9 -9      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml